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 [[ikiwiki_logo|logo/ikiwiki.png]]  
 ikiwiki is a **wiki compiler**. It converts wiki pages
-into html pages suitable for publishing on a website. Unlike a traditional
-wiki, ikiwiki does not have its own means of storing page history.
-Instead it can use [[Subversion]] (or [[Git]]).
+into html pages suitable for publishing on a website. Unlike many
+wikis, ikiwiki does not have its own means of storing page history,
+and instead uses a revision control system such as [[Subversion]].
 
 * [[News]] is a blog (built using ikiwiki) of news items about ikiwiki.
   It's the best way to find out when there's a new version to [[Download]].
@@ -11,8 +11,9 @@ Instead it can use [[Subversion]] (or [[Git]]).
   and [[bugs]] might also be of interest. Feel free to post your questions
   and thoughts about ikiwiki to [[Discussion]].
 
-[[template type=note text="""
-If you use ikiwiki, please list your wiki in [[IkiWikiUsers]]. Thanks!
+[[template id=note text="""
+If you use ikiwiki, please list your wiki in [[IkiWikiUsers]].
+Thanks! --[[Joey]]
 """]]
 
 * [[Setup]] has a tutorial for setting up ikiwiki, and [[Usage]] documents