revise XVM listing

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@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ straight from Athena lockers. Debathena is also the basis for the official
 
 ## XVM
 
 
 ## XVM
 

-[XVM](http://xvm.mit.edu) offers virtual machines to the MIT community. A virtual machine is similar to a physical server you might own: you have complete control over its configuration from the operating system up and are personally responsible for keeping the machine up-to-date. XVM removes the physical component and lets you create new machines with the click of a button. Set up a machine, and use it how you like.
+[XVM](http://xvm.mit.edu) offers virtual machines to the MIT community—complete systems which you control and maintain from the operating system up.  Create a new machine with the click of a button.  Start with our three-minute Debian or Ubuntu installer, or install an operating system of your choice.

 
 ## Library Access to Music Project (LAMP)
 
 
 ## Library Access to Music Project (LAMP)
 


@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ First steps towards improving compatibility of Mailman and Moira mailing list sy
 
 ## Dodona
 
 
 ## Dodona
 

-Dodona is a zephyrbot which uses natural language processing techniques to dynamically understand and answer technical questions.  She is still under development, and future additions include a website interface for non-zephyr users.  For questions or comments, please email dodona@mit.edu
+Dodona is a zephyrbot which uses natural language processing techniques to dynamically understand and answer technical questions.  She is still under development, and future additions include a website interface for non-zephyr users.  For questions or comments, please email <tt>dodona@mit.edu</tt>.

 
 ## This Website
 
 
 ## This Website
 


@@ -91,5 +91,5 @@ This website is a wiki. There are many [[things that can be improved|projects/ww
 ## Your Project Here
 
 SIPB has the resources and the expert advice to make your project to
 ## Your Project Here
 
 SIPB has the resources and the expert advice to make your project to

-improve computing at MIT (better, the world) happen!  Come by W20-557
+improve computing at MIT (better, the world) happen!  Come by [[our office at W20-557|office]]

 and say hello.
 and say hello.