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 You can also participate in SIPB activities like hackathons,
 [cluedumps](http://cluedumps.mit.edu/), and [IAP
-classes](http://sipb.mit.edu/iap). Our [[calendar]] contains the many of our
+classes](http://sipb.mit.edu/iap). Our [[calendar]] contains many of our
 events.
 
 ### "Furthering the Goals of SIPB"
 
-"Furthering the Goals of SIPB", or FTGOSing, usually means working on some SIPB
-[[projects]].
+"Furthering the Goals of SIPB", or FTGOSing, usually means **working on some SIPB
+[[projects]]**.
 
 Our technical [[projects]] can generally absorb arbitrary amounts of attention. If
 you are already familiar with the relevant skills, you may be able to find the
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ progress to the SIPB.  The most successful SIPB projects have often been things
 that the people involved really wanted to do, and found resources or
 collaborators to do them through SIPB.
 
-### One route
+### A possible route
 
 There are many possible ways to get involved in SIPB, but one route is: