Change the wording re: -c hello after discussion on -c sipb.

diff --git a/doc/zephyr.mdwn b/doc/zephyr.mdwn
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@@ -133,11 +133,12 @@ Some common classes include:
 > just rant about something.
 
 <strong>hello</strong>:
-> -c hello is for introducing yourself to the Zephyrsphere! Send
-> a zephyrgram to `-c hello -i YOUR_USERNAME` to let people
-> know you're a zephyr user! Don't be afraid to subscribe to the personal classes
-> of anyone who responds. In the same way, greet anyone who says 
-> hello, and sub to their class!
+> -c hello is for introducing yourself to the Zephyrsphere!
+> Send a zephyr to `-c hello -i YOUR_USERNAME` to let people
+> know you're a Zephyr user! This is a way to find out who else you know
+> uses Zephyr so you can subscribe to their class, and to get to know
+> new people through Zephyr. Also, feel free to invite others to
+> subscribe to your class!
 
 <strong>unclasses</strong>:
 > Most classes have an unclass, formed by prefixing "un" to the name. For