From: Lizhou Sha <slz@mit.edu>
Date: Wed, 16 Dec 2015 03:29:43 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: Toned down some language, and remove outdated AIM reference.
X-Git-Url: https://sipb.mit.edu/gitweb.cgi/wiki.git/commitdiff_plain/660182354d3e7be7b14c9f4468d8f9b1e22f1235

Toned down some language, and remove outdated AIM reference.
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diff --git a/doc/zephyr.mdwn b/doc/zephyr.mdwn
index 11e15c2..32768a4 100644
--- a/doc/zephyr.mdwn
+++ b/doc/zephyr.mdwn
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ usernames separated by spaces:
 
     :zwrite -C USERONE USERTWO USERTHREE
 
-The -C option automatically puts the line `CC: USERONE USERTWO USERTHREE`
+The `-C` option automatically puts the line `CC: USERONE USERTWO USERTHREE`
 in the body of the zephyr,
 although this is only a convention and is not required or enforced.
 
@@ -209,8 +209,7 @@ There are rules that people tend to use on Zephyr.  These include:
 
 Good grammar, spelling, and punctuation.  Not everybody uses
 capitalization, but they will still use good English.  Please do not say
-things such as "hey wut r u up to???".  It makes you look like an idiot.
-Really.
+things such as "hey wut r u up to???".
 
 You don't need multiple question marks or exclamation points.  Usually.
 
@@ -219,9 +218,7 @@ Vary) or IIRC (If I Remember Correctly), as well as some nerdier ones
 like DTRT (Do The Right Thing, in reference to
 [ The Rise of "Worse Is
 Better"](http://www.jwz.org/doc/worse-is-better.html)).  Try running `add sipb; whats dtrt` to look up an
-abbreviation.  Common abbreviations that you might find on AIM, however,
-are not often used.  People tend to look down upon "lol", "rofl", and
-such.
+abbreviation.
 
 Personal classes are by convention considered a little more private than
 non-personal (public) classes. Although most people don't mind people