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-# The SIPB office
+[[!meta title="The SIPB office"]]
 
 <strong>
 W20-557<br/>
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 (617) 253-7788
 </strong>
 
-The SIPB office is W20-557, next to the Athena cluster on the fifth floor of the MIT student center at 84 Mass Ave.  The office is open whenever members are present, which they are on a typical weekday afternoon and evening; you can call to check if you're heading over.
+Visitors are welcome whenever the office door is open.  Members keep the office open most every weekday afternoon and evening and some other times, but with no set hours.  You can call ahead to check if you're heading over.
+
 
 ![The office fills with people working together in a hackathon.](../photos/office-hackathon-whole.320.jpg)
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-For the MIT community we offer help with computing questions and the use of staplers, scanners, and some specialized software.  Come by whenever the office is open.
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+For the MIT community we offer walk-in computing help and services:
+
+* Unofficial help with computing questions
+* Various computer hardware for use in the office (scanners, CD/DVD burners, more)
+* Mac and WinAthena machines for short-term use
+* Office tools (stapler, big stapler, hole-punch, scissors, more) 
 
 [[Prospective members|join]] are encouraged to hang out in the SIPB office
 anytime it is open.  We strive to make it a fun and comfortable place to work on