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@@ -133,11 +133,12 @@ Some common classes include:
 > just rant about something.
 
 <strong>hello</strong>:
-> -c hello is for introducing yourself to the Zephyrsphere! Send
-> a zephyrgram to `-c hello -i YOUR_USERNAME` to let people
-> know you're a zephyr user! Don't be afraid to subscribe to the personal classes
-> of anyone who responds. In the same way, greet anyone who says 
-> hello, and sub to their class!
+> -c hello is for introducing yourself to the Zephyrsphere!
+> Send a zephyr to `-c hello -i YOUR_USERNAME` to let people
+> know you're a Zephyr user! This is a way to find out who else you know
+> uses Zephyr so you can subscribe to their class, and to get to know
+> new people through Zephyr. Also, feel free to invite others to
+> subscribe to your class!
 
 <strong>unclasses</strong>:
 > Most classes have an unclass, formed by prefixing "un" to the name. For
@@ -198,6 +199,9 @@ phrases and words being thrown around.  Some of these include:
 > linking to the original source for reasons of privacy or discretion. "eiz"
 > means "Elsewhere in Zephyr", "eip" means "Elsewhere in Personals".
 
+<strong>eiw</strong>:
+> "Elsewhere in Webspace": instance used to comment on events on the Internet beyond Zephyr (like, say, on another messaging service).
+
 <strong>eim</strong>:
 > "Elsewhere in Meatspace": instance used to comment on events not on Zephyr.