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 ## Introduction to SZS, the SMS to Zephyr Relay
 
 
 ## Introduction to SZS, the SMS to Zephyr Relay
 

-This service relays messages between Zephyr and phones (which use SMS). In other words, you can send and receive text messages in Zephyr.
+This service relays messages between Zephyr and phones (which use SMS). In other words, you can send and receive text messages in Zephyr. For the short version of this documentation, see [http://webzephyr.mit.edu/szs.html](http://webzephyr.mit.edu/szs.html).

 
 ## Zephyr to SMS
 
 
 ## Zephyr to SMS
 

-To send zephyrs to a phone address as an Athena user, use your favorite zephyr client to zwrite daemon.webzephyr with a class of `szs` and an instance of `1234567890@servicemail.foo`; for instance, in Barnowl, 
+To send zephyrs to a phone address as an Athena user, use your favorite zephyr client to zwrite `daemon.webzephyr` with a class of `szs` and an instance of `1234567890@servicemail.foo`; for instance, in Barnowl, 

 
        ----> zwrite daemon.webzephyr -c szs -i 1234567890@servicemail.foo
        Hi imaginary friend, how are you doing? I'm sending you a text message through Zephyr.
 
 
        ----> zwrite daemon.webzephyr -c szs -i 1234567890@servicemail.foo
        Hi imaginary friend, how are you doing? I'm sending you a text message through Zephyr.
 

-where you replace `1234567890@servicemail.foo` with the email address of the person you wish to reach (you can look up the email address for a given cellular provider online). Additionally, if you're not sure what cellular provider your friend has, there are online services where you can look up the number and determine the carrier.
+where you replace `1234567890@servicemail.foo` with the email address of the person you wish to reach (you can look up the email address for a given cellular provider online). Additionally, if you're not sure what cellular provider your friend has, there are online services where you can look up the number and determine the carrier. 

 
 ## SMS to Zephyr
 ### Notes
 Do note that your message **will be accompanied by your phone number**!
 
 
 ## SMS to Zephyr
 ### Notes
 Do note that your message **will be accompanied by your phone number**!
 

-Messages over 140 chars will get cut off between the phone and Zephyr. The cell phone user will get an `invalidpducontent` error, although the first part of his/her message will get through to Zephyr. On the other hand, messages *from* Zephyr to cellphones can be as long as you like.
+Messages over 140 chars will get **cut off** between the phone and Zephyr. The cell phone user will get an `invalidpducontent` error, although the first part of his/her message will get through to Zephyr. On the other hand, messages *from* Zephyr to cellphones can be as long as you like.

 
 Also, hitting "`r`" in Barnowl to reply to a zephyrgram someone sent as a text message **does not work**. You'll have to hit `[Ctrl-R]` and typing out your friend's email address. (Afterward, you can scroll back to the last one you sent to your friend and hit "`r`", which will work).
 
 
 Also, hitting "`r`" in Barnowl to reply to a zephyrgram someone sent as a text message **does not work**. You'll have to hit `[Ctrl-R]` and typing out your friend's email address. (Afterward, you can scroll back to the last one you sent to your friend and hit "`r`", which will work).