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 (617) 253-7788
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-The SIPB office is W20-557, next to the Athena cluster on the fifth floor of the MIT student center at 84 Mass Ave.  Although the office has no formal hours, SIPB members open the office whenever they can.  As a result of MIT students' noctural sleeping habits, the office is open on most weekday afternoons and evenings, as well as some weekends and holidays.  If you're heading over and want to make sure someone's there, you can call to check.
+Visitors are welcome whenever the office door is open.  Members keep the office open most every weekday afternoon and evening and some other times, but with no set hours.  You can call ahead to check if you're heading over.

 
 
 ![The office fills with people working together in a hackathon.](../photos/office-hackathon-whole.320.jpg)
 
 
 ![The office fills with people working together in a hackathon.](../photos/office-hackathon-whole.320.jpg)